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The lights fade,
My mind is in a shade,
Of foolish emotions,
And new complications,
Acting like flashing lights,
Oh these choatic nights.

They come and go,
So that I don't know,
How to react,
Standing here barely intact.

With hope held so close,
I just need one dose,
To help the pain,
Drift away and not remain.

In my mind,
I've been so blind.
©2007-2009 ~Penguin-of-Leetness
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Author's Comments

This is one of the first poems I wrote down and ran with instead of ignoring my poetic muse in my head xD It really fit how i was feeling at the time and I think it is very good!
Tell me what you think ^-^

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:iconoozingmoo:
wow... you're just one of those natural poets who can just run with their thoughts and come up with this AMAZING poem
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=D ty soooooooo much!

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